Here are the eight baddies.
We – Me – I – Our – Us – Difference – Solution – Quality
The one word you must use – you!
Your mission.
What makes people tick? Philosophers have long speculated that people get up every day and do what they do to be happy, not the right now feel-good happy but the inner happiness that is derived over time when life has meaning.
Meaningful lives are realized when their individual desires are
fulfilled and imprints imprinted. Home furnishings satisfy many
desires. For example home furnishings help parents with their
desire to raise strong families. Home furnishings can help boost
self-esteem, build independence, show off, or just fill a space
because the floor is uncomfortable or not a nice place to eat. Your
task as an independent home furnishings retailer is to develop and
deliver a customer experience that scratches the itches of your
potential customers.
The role of advertising.
As an owner you make decisions on your business purpose, what
merchandise to offer, where to be located, whom to hire, how to
compensate, train, and motivate. These decisions create a culture
that shapes your customers’ experience. If your experience
touches them deeply they will share with others and be loyal to
you. How well you do compared to your competition is the
foundation for your word-of-mouth advertising.
However, the home furnishings business model cannot rely on word-of-mouth advertising for survival or growth. You must entice strangers to visit you, and your weapon of influence is called advertising. Your advertising is simply the process where you pay somebody to tell someone what you want to tell them.
Five questions to ask yourself before advertising.
Do you want to create advertising that 1) draws immediate traffic or is remembered when your potential customer has needs of what you sell? Then (2), what is that advertising message, (3) to
whom shall you direct it, (4) who shall carry it and (5) at what price?
Most independent retailers’ advertising is designed to draw immediate traffic. This mode of advertising is commonly called transactional advertising.
How transactional advertising works.
Transactional advertising is intrusive, logical, urgent, and packed with an undeniable offer. Transactional advertising interests only those who are “in the market” right now for what you have. And that number is only about 2% of your market at any one time. OK, let’s say 3%, no 4%. Still a small number.
To succeed in transactional advertising you sit down at the table with your competition and play transactional poker. In thisgame the player who intrudes the most with the best offer generally gets the bulk of the 2% traffic. OK, 4% traffic. One hand per weekend, winner determined by close on Monday.
A Tent Sale trumps a Coupon Sale. A Coupon Sale trumps a Summer Home Sale. A GOB trumps them all. The result is like real poker hands, you win some and you lose some. And if you sit one out you certainly lose. Hopefully, you’ll win more than your original ante. If not, you go home.
Transactional advertising messages can be carried by any media, including non-traditional media, but it is best conveyed through print. Many of you are learning that the table stakes to play transactional poker are rising as the cost of media increases (and their effectiveness decreases).
How to increase your transactional advertising chances.
• First, the basics. Get their attention (think of jumping at them
from behind a door and yelling “boo).” Give them a Godfather
offer and substantiate it with as much supporting evidence as
possible. Put a time limit on your offer and run the ad as much as
many times as you can afford.
• Second, tell the truth. “Trick them to stick them” is a strategy that
is working less today and won’t work at all tomorrow.
• Third, don’t be cute and sprinkle in relational messages with your
transactional advertising. No, I’m not talking about consistency or
inconsistency of your creative look. I’m talking about confusing
your right-now deal with long term promises.
• Fourth, hire the right media. Know which media are best for
immediate traffic and those best for long-term branding. Mixed
messages confuse everyone, including your sales staff. Print is
better suited for transactional advertising targeting transactional
shoppers,and electronic media is better suited for relational
advertising targeting relational shoppers.
• Fifth, transactional advertising is thought to be more intellectual
than emotional. Partially true. We buy on emotion and justify with
logic. But every product has an inherent nature that can be
emotionally pitched. Find that emotional hot button. Then don’t
dilly dally with your offer. Put your deal up front and back it up
with as much authenticity as possible using words that emote
emotion. Admittedly, this is easier said than done and that’s
partially why you pay agencies and copywriters.
• And sixth, make the ad about the customer. The best ads are
about your customer and how your productds or service
will change their life. Unfortunately, most advertising is about the
product, the company that makes it or
you, the company that sells it. Many retailers believe that
because they are paying for the advertising they want to talk
about themselves. Me. My store. My history. My service. My
products. Much advertising assumes the customer cares and is
asking What, When, and Where. In reality your customer is
asking nothing – and if they did they would be asking Why?
Let’s get specific!
Here’s an example of a poorly written transactional home
furnishings radio script. Yes, this script can easily be intrusive with voice, inflection, music bed, and frequency. However the ho-hum offer of lower prices and good service justified by a trumped up store event and time served is weak and vague. It’s all about the advertiser, left-brain logical, emotionless, and full of baddie words.
Wake up (insert your town’s name)! (insert your store name
here) is holding our annual (insert current sale). For a limited
time we are offering our lowest prices of the year on name brand
quality furniture. (insert your name, sales manager’s name, and
top sales associates’ name here) have personally retagged our
large sales floor.We’ve marked down our sofas, famous (insert
recliner mfg here) recliners, bedrooms, and dining rooms – huge
savings! Plus, all (insert mattress mfg here) mattresses – sets
starting as low as (insert $299 or $399). And, at (insert your
store name here), we have flexible financing with approved credit
and fast delivery. See us for details. Since (insert year of origin)
we have been (insert your town’s name) furniture solution. Our
people are proud to make the difference. So, during (insert store
name here)’s gigantic (insert current sale) you’ll find all your
furniture needs. We’re open from 10 to 8 Monday thru Saturday,
closed Sundays. Call (insert your store name here) at (insert
phone number here). And come and see us. But, hurry, our deal
won’t last long!
The eight baddie words never to use in advertising…
Baddies – We – Me – I – Our – Us: These are personal
pronouns. When these five personal pronouns appear in an ad the
ad is generally about the seller, not the customer. However, skilled
copywriters can use these personal pronouns and make the
communication personal – and that’s OK. Face the truth. Your
potential customers care only about themselves, not you. You are
just not that interesting. There are twelve personal pronouns in the
above copy, all about the advertiser.
Baddy – Difference: Most advertisers are just too lazy to dig,
study, and think, write and rewrite until “the difference” is
discovered. What is the difference between your people and
theirs? Your product and theirs? If it’s a major selling point find it
and articulate it!
Baddy – Solution: Think about it. What are you selling if it’s not a
solution to some problem? Identify the problem and your specific
solution. Your potential customer will determine if it fits them or not.
Baddy – Quality: Quality is purely subjective. Everything has
some spectrum of quality – from poor to great. It’s not for you to
decide the quality. Again, your potential customer will make that
determination.
And here are some additional baddies for you to ponder:
Baddy – Any superlative adjective (most – best – superior –
lowest – largest – fastest – lightest – cleanest – etc):
Copywriters use superlative adjectives as short cuts to fit radio
and print formats. Unfortunately, it’s a slippery slope where original
clarity of thought easily slides into murkiness. Empty adjectives
such as lowest, huge, gigantic, and superior should be clarified, a
premise long copy direct response writers understand well. Too
often in the home furnishings industry advertisers cram convincing
selling points to predictable, boring, and meaningless words.
There’s a bunch of superlatives in the above radio script.
Baddy – Source: Please, don’t say you are the source unless you
clarify for what.
Baddy – Technology: Smart advertisers figured out long ago that
consumers don’t buy technology. They buy what the technology
brings them. Don’t tout any technology. Tout what it does.
Baddy – Your business name: Many independent retailers have
been taught that the more you machine gun your name the more it
will stick in the mind of your target. In reality the mind is packed
with piles of memory guarded by the subconscious. And yes, you
can beat the subconscious into submission by getting your name
out enough. But there is no real value in just your name, and your
ad will not be remembered until you answer the customer question
“Why should I care.”
And now for the one word you must use….YOU!
This is worth repeating. One of the biggest mistakes advertisers
make is focusing on themselves and not their potential customer.
The word “you” is one of the most powerful words in the English
language. It ignites imagination and stirs emotion allowing you to
take your potential customers exactly where you want them to go –
now! It opens a path to the right side of the brain where decisions
are made before they are justified.
Your advertising needs to produce results. The word “you” is the
gatekeeper to these results.
Willie’s Challenge
I choose not rewrite and improve the previous transactional radio
script I used to demonstrate the baddie words (Wake up (insert your
town’s name)! (insert your store name here) is holding our annual
(insert current sale)…
…what I will do is issue you a challenge. Email me two radio spots
you have run (script or electronic version). I will rewrite your two
radio scripts and demonstrate how the camera can be turned away
from you and focused on your potential customer. If it is already
pointed there I will improve your aim. In the end you will have a
stronger ad, led by the word “you.” Deal?
Send your scripts/spots to willie@willie4you.com . Please put
Radio Challenge in the subject field.
Advertising is just your truth well told. Isn’t it time you tell yours better? Take the challenge.